Writing a new song..

I have started writing this since Saturday.. I have this catchy sad verse.. (the lyrics + the melody)

I don't know where to go,
I don't know where to hide,
In the middle of the nite,
All alone deep inside..

yes.. im writing this in the middle of the nite but i don't feel alone.. though im actually alone but not deep inside.. im thinking of somebody else while writing this.. a guy who has been dumped by a girl that he loves so much..

as usual.. i have to create the chorus first after a catchy verse so that i can keep my mood going with this new song. I tried many times before to write a second verse first or leave the verse first and the chorus later.. but then it will stuck there forever.. then i lost the melody.. then i lost the mood.. then i scrap the song..

so.. i don't want to waste this beautiful sad verse.. after an hour, i came up with these

she said,
"No no no.. i don't love you anymore.. im sorry"

i said,
Why why why.. this is not the promise you made before.. i remember"

she said,
"ya ya ya.. i break the promise i made before.. im leaving you... im leaving youuuuuu...."

it sounds like sad but fun.. a little cliche however.. i still like it.. so be it cliche or typical.. or what.. i just like it..

ok.. then.. i run it like 20 - 30 times to memorize and keep the rhythm going in my head.. then i sleep.

i woke up tomorrow morning.. somebody woke me up :).. texting a couple of SMS n then i grab my guitar again and continue writing. but.. nothing.

i took a shower.. making myself a glass of Nescafe tarik.. n then i continue again. nothing.. still.

so that day was not productive at all.. until midnite comes again.. this song gonna be a fun song.. not a sad song. so how to make a fun out of the misery of being dumped? yes.. at the end of the song that girl who dumped the singer must be dumped by a new guy he met.. hahaha. how cruel i am.

so the second verse will be something like..


She loved me, that will stay,
forever, will be this way,
thats the promise she did say,
but one day, she turned away..

and then comes the chorus.


she said,
"No no no.. i don't love you anymore.. im sorry"

i said,
Why why why.. it is not the promise you made before.. i remember"

she said,
"ya ya ya.. i break the promise i made before.. im leaving you... im leaving youuuuuu...."

and of course.. i will always have bridge in my song. But i haven't finish it.. however the bridge will be like the singer is missing the girl so much. and then the third verse where the girl meeting a new guy and then the FUN PART WILL START. the guy is dumping the girl. and the second chorus will have a little different.. it will sounds like..

He said,
"No no no.. this heart isn't yours anymore.. im sorry"

She said,
Why why why.. it is not the promise you made before.. i remember"

He said,
"ya ya ya.. i break the promise i made before.. im leaving you... wohoohooo... im leaving youuuuuu...."


yeahhh.. thats the fun part.. so it will end like..

Now I know where to go
And i dont need to hide
in the middle of the nite,
im not alone by my side

however.. the lyrics might change.. but the storyline is the same... so.. i will update soon once i finished .. adios!